Tom Hart (tomhart) says: I like it! The last panel's rendition of enlightenment is priceless. I like all those zen stories of monks reaching enlightenment after being whacked on the head. You should alter the halos around the characters in black- either white out the horizon right at the point they meet, or make it so their outline is white in the sky- in other words, the white would continue down to black on the body. It's not a halo, it's part of the drawing. I say that all cause it will be easier to read. Your simple balance of black and white is nice. The peanuts quality of it all, always a bonus. Nice!