Wednesday - January 12, 2005:

This is one hell of a comic. Read Tart now (Click the woman's head at the bottom of the page to start reading). I guarantee you a laugh or ten. The internet needs more work of this quality and I can only hope there's more Tart to come. It is funny, sexy and irreverent, increasingly so as the strip goes on.

The art is equally entertaining, a nice cartoony line that owes as much to the comics underground as it does to the funny pages.

For advice, I have just three bits. First, make the entrance to the strips more obvious. I was in a rush on my first visit and didn't realize I needed to click on her head to start reading. I think you'll lose lots of readers unless the entrance is more obvious. Second, this work needs to be shopped around the internet. There's got to be a paying home for this kind of humor, Girlamatic or Modern Tales maybe. Third, keep it coming. There is no archive so I clicked through hoping there were tons of strips to laugh my way through. Alas, there are only something like twenty pages. Please give us more. Thanks for the submission. Any other creators willing to put their work up for review, er, perusal by the boys?

I wonder what others think about this one. Is it as good as I think it is?

-Bob Stevenson